Sandra Adams Poet Rhyme

This Love----Rhyme Version

oh! That this rose would be a symbol of love
the way it blooms- your beauty be told
your perfumed scent in the fragrance of
and lo the thorns pierce just as bold!



February 20, 2020

not for contest!

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Jennifer Proxenos February 24, 2020 at 11:53 AM Awesome Sandy - a wonderful poem by a talented poetess. Your pen does excel in anything you write, I agree 100% with Chris. Blessings, Jennifer. Sandra Adams February 24, 2020 at 7:26 PM wow… thank you for such kind words Jennifer... hugs

Chris Green February 24, 2020 at 8:19 AM Wow, and now the rhyming version. Your pen excels in every area it explores my friend. This was beautiful Sandy Sandra Adams February 24, 2020 at 11:20 AM thank you so much Chris... hugs

Lindsay Laurie February 23, 2020 at 5:42 PM Hello Sandra … like a sting in the tail, so be a mite wary. I enjoyed your verse Sandra - Lindsay Sandra Adams February 23, 2020 at 7:55 PM Thank you so very much Lindsay! :)

Running Wolves February 23, 2020 at 1:24 PM wonderful poem Sandra Adams February 23, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thank you

Quoth Theraven February 22, 2020 at 11:14 PM Sandra, I came to stir my senses, and you turned the mixer up to puree. -Richard Sandra Adams February 23, 2020 at 7:54 PM lol... thank you Richard...I think...

Sara Kendrick February 22, 2020 at 4:43 PM Enjoyed reading your work. Very comparative in metaphor language. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:31 PM Thank you so much Sara... hugs

Arturo Michael February 22, 2020 at 11:49 AM I like this...The pierce of thorns...is there to feel Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:30 PM Thank you so much Arturo :) hugs

Alexis Y. February 22, 2020 at 11:29 AM Hi Sandra, You’ve a good descriptive write. Why not enter it in the contest? Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:30 PM Thank you so much Alexis... :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2020 at 11:03 AM - BEAUTIFUL :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:29 PM Thank you Anne-Lise… hugs

Tom Cunningham February 22, 2020 at 10:11 AM Well composed Sandra, both as good as each other. Tom Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:29 PM Thank you so much Tom... :) hugs

Vijay Pandit February 22, 2020 at 8:53 AM I like this just as much as the one you wrote for the contest--but, I like the other one a bit more. Well done my friend. Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thank you so much Vijay...I altered the other one some again, trying to get it where I want it... hugs

Mark Koplin February 22, 2020 at 8:32 AM So beautiful. Your words are magical. Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:27 PM Thank you so much Mark :) hugs