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This love for you is elemental

I feel you crackling in the sky tonight There's no need to shout— your words are louder than mine We're tethered, not by bolts, or voltage, but this lightning's light Current that hums through concrete where our fields align With ruthless brilliance, the likes of which my life has never before witnessed I am the rain that finds you drop by drop Tracing the map of your skin I'll never stop; this... It is not soft, it isn't sweet; It's far from passe or even close to sentimental. Do not flinch, let it soak you to the bone; sometimes love needs to be elemental!

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Date: 7/2/2025 7:15:00 PM
Wow, A.S. This is beautiful! What a concept-
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, for seeing the beauty in me even though I can't see it myself... fondly A.S.

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