This Love

This love I feel is so surreal 
It's something I thought I'd never feel
Like Blowing through the wind on a starry night
Or knowing that your wrong but feeling oh so right

This love I feel is sometimes confusing
I know I'm winning but I feel like I'm losing
I think that my feelings are true
But the more I ponder it I begin feeling blue

Could this love be something that's meant to be
Or am I trying to hard to make it the perfect fairytale for me
Could it be something that I've just made up in my head
Or is my heart starving so much and waiting to be fed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Harrell Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Ah, what a question! Hope you find the answer soon :)
Mason Gibbs Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Toquyen for reading my poetry, sorry for the very late response.
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