This Love

This love stops burning on the torch.
I sit on the porch,
Waiting for my love to return to me.
Then I see,
He is not coming back.
So I get my things packed.
With all the things I lack,
I still go. . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mcmorrow Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 5:48 PM
this is a very good poem. it explains a heartbreak in a very good way.
Watts Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 4:48 PM
what if he yells at me? and i cant make long distance calls on my house phone and he's blocked form my phone
Ferguson Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 3:35 PM
Why are you in love with me?
Ferguson Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 3:14 PM
ok...with who?
Ferguson Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 3:03 PM
what?
Ferguson Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 2:43 PM
Your story.
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