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This Line of Words

This line of words and silly birds have absolutely nothing in common, except perhaps the sounds of life as this crazy world goes 'round and 'round, and we are trapped in the anxiety of passing time.

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Date: 3/5/2024 1:36:00 PM
This is a clever verse. Time certainly causes anxiety. It either goes too fast, or goes too slow.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/5/2024 1:40:00 PM
Truly. It seems there is no in between
Date: 3/4/2024 2:16:00 AM
I like this Chetta. It’s as if this poem has guided you, the poet, to some place of its own choosing. Almost organic. My thoughts only. :) Cheers - Gary
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/4/2024 7:29:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/3/2024 4:34:00 PM
sometimes we just need to stay what's on our minds...I can understand and appreciate your thoughts
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/3/2024 5:25:00 PM
This poem was just a random thought process, but sometimes that is how a poem is born.

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