This Line of Words

This line of words 
and silly birds
have absolutely nothing 
in common,
except perhaps 
the sounds of life
as this crazy world 
goes 'round and 'round,
and we are trapped
in the anxiety 
of passing time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 1:36 PM
This is a clever verse. Time certainly causes anxiety. It either goes too fast, or goes too slow.
Achara Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Truly. It seems there is no in between
Radice Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 2:16 AM
I like this Chetta. It’s as if this poem has guided you, the poet, to some place of its own choosing. Almost organic. My thoughts only. :) Cheers - Gary
Achara Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Thank you
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