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This Life Sucks

"This life sucks," myopics say They can not see the light of day They can not see beyond their nose And that's the way their small view goes How dreary every life would be When moon and stars you can not see Or hear birds chirping in their nest Nor watch the sun set in the west So many things to see and do Myopics choose the narrow view To live or die is all they see How wonderful that they're not me!

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Date: 6/24/2018 6:22:00 PM
ah, very well rhymed and very well said! nice one, rico...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/24/2018 7:44:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/23/2018 11:17:00 PM
How wonderful indeed. A very sweet poem, Rico.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/24/2018 7:44:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/23/2018 11:08:00 PM
Rico, they aren't me either, thank goodness!!
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