This Journey

My love, since you came, life has changed,
You have been my hope, my inspiration and my motivation,
You have taken my heart where it has never trodden,
You have filled my soul with hope I have spent years in search off.

Love is a journey to travel my Love,
A journey for two not one,
And this journey I want to make with you,
You beside me and me beside you my Love,
You in me, me in you.

I want to make this journey with you my love,
With you I will gain strength,
With you I will never be feeble,
With you I will never dwindle,
For in you I find strength.

This journey my Love, sometimes it is tough,
But I will be with you my Love,
I will hold you close to myself,
I will hide your heart in mine,
I will keep you warm until the end.

If you will my Love, our love will grow,
We will be the best couples on earth,
Our lineage will learn from us my Love,
For you are the perfection of my heart,
And my passion for you will never fade.

Will you my Love?
Will you go with me my Love?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/4/2016 9:08:00 AM
And so i cried...plus your old school love poem tells my story too. the way your write ups spring up moods takes one with absolute nostalgia.
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:56:00 PM
Boygene, this is wonderful. I hope she said yes, I would fall right away. If only all words are true when spoken. LOVE SKAT
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Boygene Rabura
Date: 10/16/2015 3:04:00 AM
really? you will fall for me right away? hahaha...thank you so much for your comment
Date: 10/13/2015 12:51:00 PM
This is a beautiful write Boygene ;) really enjoyed reading it tonight..
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Boygene Rabura
Date: 10/16/2015 3:07:00 AM
thank you. i feel honoured when you comment :)
Date: 10/13/2015 8:30:00 AM
Feelings of love inundating the heart with bliss! Excellent dear B.R.!
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Boygene Rabura
Date: 10/16/2015 3:09:00 AM
thank you. love encrypts my heart with joyful feelings thats why i keep pouring out my thoughts...
Date: 10/12/2015 8:07:00 AM
Wow!!!! What a fabulous piece. Your descriptive was conveyed with extreme passion of love. The smooth flows of your depicted imagery that brought you write to life in the sense of this reader, it makes me to inhale its beautiful scent and intoxicated my mind. Excellent write friend. A great journey indeed, dark and light like the day and night..........A.M.
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Boygene Rabura
Date: 10/13/2015 6:43:00 AM
thank you so much. am really humbled to be here. i appreciate your comment and i feel privileged to meet you here on soup
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