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This poem deals with the pre-fall mindset, the post fall mindset and the eternal mindset, and the work and care that The Trinity undertakes to insure the progress of His people.

 

May be an image of snake and apple

This is your Garden of Eden It’s a garden that needs weedin’ And it needs seedin’ To get you Heaven ready This is Satan’s offering Offering you to sin and skip the drossing (He offered Christ a shortcut to His crossing) To get you [not Him] Hell ready Once able to choose the good or evil freely Now only able to choose the evil freely With Father, Son and Spirit completely We will be Heaven ready This will be your Garden of Eden It’s a garden (no need of weedin’) No need of seedin’ You will be firmly planted in the good freely in eternity

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Date: 3/20/2025 11:12:00 AM
We be weedin and seedin. Love it.
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Michael Ramel
Date: 3/22/2025 5:28:00 PM
:)
Date: 3/19/2025 8:49:00 AM
Love this, Mike! Nicely done!
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Michael Ramel
Date: 3/19/2025 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Kim....and Praise Jesus for His patience with us

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