Notes About The Poem
This poem deals with the pre-fall mindset, the post fall mindset and the eternal mindset, and the work and care that The Trinity undertakes to insure the progress of His people.

 

 

This Is Your Garden of Eden


This is your Garden of Eden

It’s a garden that needs weedin’

And it needs seedin’

To get you Heaven ready


This is Satan’s offering

Offering you to sin and skip the drossing

(He offered Christ a shortcut to His crossing)

To get you [not Him] Hell ready


Once able to choose the good or evil freely 

Now only able to choose the evil freely 

With Father, Son and Spirit completely

We will be Heaven ready 


This will be your Garden of Eden

It’s a garden (no need of weedin’)

No need of seedin’

You will be firmly planted in the good freely in eternity


P.S. Where was Adam he should've led her
Do you think you could've done better?
(Not metaphorically I ask it rhetorically)
Of course no one could've done better
Only one Man and for our sake
Can save us from (not Bob Seger's) Fire Lake
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Mellgren Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 11:12 AM
We be weedin and seedin. Love it.
Ramel Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:28 PM
:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Love this, Mike! Nicely done!
Ramel Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Kim....and Praise Jesus for His patience with us
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