This Is Wonderful News To Hear the Feelings of Someone Else's Blues

This is wonderful news
to hear the feelings of someone else's blues....
consider it rude? 
then u haven't felt the "love shock blues" smother your thoughts, 
for every hour you hope they get less sour... 
I wanna heave this feeling from within 
and wipe my mouth like it was a dirty sin...
I'd swear on my children to make things right 
but lie to my god as if I'm not in site.. 
Love and passion lead my way 
and refusing to resist temptation has only made me persist!  
Hiss at your thoughts like a dirty ol' cat 
I'll kiss you tomorrow at a drop of a hat!
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February 16, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Ele very cool words...David
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