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This Is May

This is May The time of the beginning of the month of rains This is May The teen girl coming boldly to my mother's room This is May Don Colon sails to Discovery Bay and leave in chains This is May Her young body like a delicate and exotic perfume Are clouds dark as memory On the old page of history This is May And I prefer none, but long to be there When gully overflows cleansing me of fear: (a) May murmurs in trees Golden with juicy blossoms Falling for the rain (b) May bares her bright breast To the oval lips of skies The young heart thunders (c) May brings her ships to bay Laden with lost sailors' joy Black rivers run red (d) May wears the mountain scent From fragrant flowers succulent Hope seeks new domain (e) May too is for love Love of brave warriors' drums Beating like a heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 9:00:00 PM
truly inspirational! L'nass!! very helpful to me tonight!!! James
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Date: 6/9/2009 1:19:00 AM
Ahhhh,..may,..the blooming flowers each year are new ! james
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:39:00 PM
Wow, May sounds nice, I love personification; is this in layers? I guess next year I will really enjoy the month =D=D thanks a lot for the experience =D=D
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:50:00 PM
Love it!I WAS BORN IN MAY:D Wohooo!xo
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Date: 6/5/2009 1:09:00 PM
May is a wonderful month and how quickly a flies into June. Great writing and very telling.
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Date: 6/5/2009 5:53:00 AM
this is awesome, a great tribute to the month of may. pleasecheck your soupmail
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:21:00 AM
How shall I start???.......L'nass Shango.......You are one of my favourite poets....Brilliant write buddy.....!!! Keep It up.......Thanx for the encouraging comments you made on my poems....Thanx and may god bless u..>> ur lil sis Crystal
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:08:00 AM
L'nass, I really like this poem. The last verses, which were preceeded by the (letters) was particularly beautiful. God bless you. And keep writing, Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful writing L'nass sheer class especially like haiku d .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:53:00 PM
Quite an erotic and romantic write that looks at many of the sights as well as historical events that emerged in May. Beautiful writing, Shango! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:44:00 PM
a powerful tribute to the month of may, beautifully written with faith love and respect,,truly a treasure,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 6/4/2009 2:50:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to the month of May! Again master truly is your pen talented! Please keep sharing your precious gift! - jeremia
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Date: 6/4/2009 2:41:00 PM
so lovely and thought provoking...may June make you happy too! Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2009 2:36:00 PM
May--this is my month and i love it!all these descriptions here-May-juicy blossoms,May-mountain's scent-May-the month of flowers and i love flowers all colours all kind,everywhere you look in my country in May- carpets of flowers-i love May and i love this poem,it goes to my favs-to my heart too--wonderful scented write--charma;)
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