This Is An Awful Poem
This poem here is bloody awful
it doesn’t flow or rhyme at all tool
forced rhymes move like a turtle
in the shell but for head and tail
A tortoise has a tail but why?
can you tell me with your wise?
tails are for balance has a tortoise ever fell
I’d say that’s a design fail tail with shell
I told you this wasn’t written well
yeah somehow it prevails
beats a holiday in Newbridge Wales
or eternal damnation down in hell.
This is an awful poem but you read it anyway.
How can you ignore my words then read what I say?
Lol
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