This heart

This heart is old, it owns no thesis.
 This heart's been broken,
a zillion pieces, coated in chocolate,
sold as Reese's..
This heart still holds the human species.
It laughs with Buddha.
It walks with Jesus..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Proxenos Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 6:59 AM
I do love this short poem, every line full of meaning. Much love and hugs, Jennifer.
Greenhough Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:34 PM
This is a poem of talented variety by combining rhyme, fantasy and spirituality. I tend to read it again and again, each time listening to the song-like cadence.
Kaufman Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Dear Hilda, Sorry to be so late in responding to your wonderfully kind and encouraging words. They are most appreciated. Blessings to you..
Mcintosh Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 5:58 PM
So adorable... I would say it laughs at Buddha... ha ha. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Kaufman Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Hi Regina, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Blessings dear friend.
Empress Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:58 AM
Ah so beautiful how youv written this evocative poem dear Nancy: i think my heart is also coated in chocolate. What a way to describe your heart that remains sweet amidst all that you’ve seen and felt. Your last two lines shows how you accept all aspects of life and humankind, how you have a big heart, for all! Which is precious and heartwarming to read! Sending you light always poetic soul. Hope you are doing well
Kaufman Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Hi Ink, Thank you for the heart felt comments and I apologize for not acknowledging them earlier. I'm afraid my muse went on vacation or some thing like that. Blessings to you always..
One Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Lovely and does your heart appease to other religious figures also? A heart never really gets old, in my opinion.. only our outer does.. however, a heart can get sick if we do not look after it... I hope you are well..
Kaufman Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 6:32 AM
apologize for the wording as it was not meant to be literal..
Parker Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Provocative pondering, Nancy. :o))
Kaufman Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Hi Arlo, It was meant to be figuratively but oh well..
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 7:56 AM
It gives us life, may yours tick for many years to come. Tom
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