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This Gem of Mine

A dinosaur, said he saw, the seashore, but he wasn't sure what the sea was for. A butterfly, said he saw the sky, but he didn't know why, the sky was so high. A humble turtle, fumbled over a hurdle, but being a turtle, it didn't hurt at all. A fat cat sat on a mat after eating a rat. I picked up a pen, at ten past ten, and robbed you of time with this gem of mine. 8/09/2018

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Nick Trim
Date: 3/20/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Sara :)
Date: 8/14/2018 10:10:00 PM
Lol! Ahhh it's not robbery if it's voluntarily given. Congratulations on your win. Creative. Well done. :)
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Nick Trim
Date: 3/20/2019 6:58:00 AM
lol Thanks Susan :)
Date: 8/12/2018 10:20:00 AM
You can rob me of my time any time with gems like that, Nick. Congrats on your win.
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/12/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Line :)
Date: 8/12/2018 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful and descriptive! Well done Nick!
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/12/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Francesca :)
Date: 8/12/2018 5:11:00 AM
Nice rhyming poem, congrats on your win in the contest!
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Nick Trim
Date: 8/12/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, I wasn't sure it qualified or fit the criteria lol Thanks for the placement

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