John Bernard Poet Rhyme

This Friend

This friend
Will not bend
Love I will send
Right until the end
It’s not a passing trend
If I broke it I would mend
What you needed I would lend
On this nothing would rely or depend
Just to let you know that I will always be your friend

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L'Nass Shango December 7, 2009 at 11:30 AM And those line stretch resolutely capturing the subject in the form ... well done!

Elsa Gonzalez December 6, 2009 at 8:49 PM I really enjoyed your poem! Officially one of my faves from now on.

Jessica Arteaga December 5, 2009 at 11:39 PM you could put this as a monorhyme since each sentence ends with the same sounding rhyme. very good and lovely show of friendship.

Carolyn Devonshire December 5, 2009 at 10:18 PM Anyone would be lucky to have a friend like you, John. This is very moving. And I love the way the structure builds with longer lines but consistant rhyme. Very creative style employed here! Love, Carolyn