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This Friend

This friend Will not bend Love I will send Right until the end It’s not a passing trend If I broke it I would mend What you needed I would lend On this nothing would rely or depend Just to let you know that I will always be your friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 11:30:00 AM
And those line stretch resolutely capturing the subject in the form ... well done!
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Date: 12/6/2009 8:49:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem! Officially one of my faves from now on.
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Date: 12/5/2009 11:39:00 PM
you could put this as a monorhyme since each sentence ends with the same sounding rhyme. very good and lovely show of friendship.
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Date: 12/5/2009 10:18:00 PM
Anyone would be lucky to have a friend like you, John. This is very moving. And I love the way the structure builds with longer lines but consistant rhyme. Very creative style employed here! Love, Carolyn
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