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This Doesn'T Make Any Sense

Blood like breath spilling from the lips Life like death sailing and sinking ships Dance in the sun, forget sorrow Embrace into one; here comes tomorrow Feel pain and die again Never know when to say when Love like life There's blood on your knife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2012 9:44:00 PM
congrats Christopher on a top ten win for excellent lines of poetry luv..
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 11:37:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/30/2012 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winwith this wonderful write Christopher. Elizabeth
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
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Date: 1/30/2012 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Christopher
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
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Date: 1/30/2012 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Christopher. Love, Carol
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:49:00 AM
Thought provoking write.Congratulations on your win.
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/30/2012 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations Christopher (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/30/2012 5:01:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/26/2012 11:55:00 AM
Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Christopher. Love, Carol
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 5:18:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/26/2012 6:35:00 AM
Very nicely done...economical, clearly stated, creative.
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/26/2012 2:09:00 AM
Very well written Christopher,good poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Christopher Stones
Date: 1/26/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thank you.

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