Christopher Stones Poet Couplet

This Doesn'T Make Any Sense

Blood like breath spilling from the lips
Life like death sailing and sinking ships

Dance in the sun, forget sorrow
Embrace into one; here comes tomorrow

Feel pain and die again
Never know when to say when

Love like life
There's blood on your knife

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 30, 2012 at 9:44 PM congrats Christopher on a top ten win for excellent lines of poetry luv.. Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 11:37 PM Thank you

Lizanne Scholtz January 30, 2012 at 11:29 AM Congratulations on your winwith this wonderful write Christopher. Elizabeth Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 5:00 PM Thank you

Bob Quigley January 30, 2012 at 10:20 AM Congratulations on your win Christopher Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 5:00 PM Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown January 30, 2012 at 7:32 AM Congratulations on your placement Christopher. Love, Carol Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 5:00 PM Thank you

Kash Poet January 30, 2012 at 5:49 AM Thought provoking write.Congratulations on your win. Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 5:00 PM Thank you

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 30, 2012 at 3:10 AM Congratulations Christopher (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x Christopher Stones January 30, 2012 at 5:01 PM Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown January 26, 2012 at 11:55 AM Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Christopher. Love, Carol Christopher Stones January 26, 2012 at 5:18 PM Thank you.

Leo Larry Amadore January 26, 2012 at 6:35 AM Very nicely done...economical, clearly stated, creative. Christopher Stones January 26, 2012 at 11:43 AM Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2012 at 2:09 AM Very well written Christopher,good poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise Christopher Stones January 26, 2012 at 11:43 AM Thank you.