Andrea Dietrich Poet Enclosed Rhyme

This Day - My Autumn Dream

A day to relish is this day of mine.
October’s sunlight warmly rests on me,
and sky, immersed in blue, is heavenly
while nature flaunts its lovely fall design!

The trees along my street stand splendidly,
bright ruby red and gold hues on display.
My autumn’s dream is that the world would stay
exactly like this day, perpetually!

Written  Oct. 21, 2011, one beauty of a day

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 8, 2011 at 5:33 AM Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "8 Line Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster November 8, 2011 at 2:36 AM Lovely images and easy going feeling to this one Andrea. I see you relaxing , perhaps sitting in a window with the sun warm on the glass, watching all the beauty around you. great words, well done...Margaret thank you for your kind words...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2011 at 7:58 PM Congrats Andrea on HM for this stunningly beautiful poetry entry my friend..lovely lines luv..

Bob Quigley November 7, 2011 at 2:21 PM Very nice lines Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Autumn's Dream contest

Charlotte Puddifoot November 7, 2011 at 2:17 PM congrats on another win with this lovely evocation of autumn!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 25, 2011 at 8:41 PM lovely words for a lovely season Andrea.. charming lines of visual delights ... good luck in the contest for Rick.. luv..

Robert Johnson October 24, 2011 at 10:44 AM You make me jealous I don't live in your head. Your painted pictures are where I want to bed. The freshness of air just fills up my senses. Falls freedom releases all my defenses.

Black Eyed Susan October 24, 2011 at 7:03 AM very pretty imagery. I agree that it's a shame that fall is so short when it has such beautiful colors! maybe it is to make us appreciate it while it's there. I love how you said "nature flaunts its lovely fall design" and "autumns' dream..." great lines and ending. i hope rick sees what a beautiful piece this is :)

Zzzzz Zzzzz October 24, 2011 at 6:35 AM Autumn certainly is a colourful season, and you capture the essence of it here in this poem. I have read so many really good autumn/fall poems recently, but this must stand a good chance in the contest...good luck. xoxo Robert.

Poet Destroyer A October 24, 2011 at 3:55 AM Hello, Andrea... nice poem and good entry for the contest.. how are you, besides sharing your awesomeness ,,.. stopping by real quick,,, p.d.

Jack Horne October 23, 2011 at 5:42 AM Beautiful visuals - a sure winner. Hope you get to use your number plate again soon : )

Sara Kendrick October 23, 2011 at 5:03 AM Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..The cool and crispness of the air is wonderful respite from the heat of summer and the cold of winter..God is so good..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

John Smith October 22, 2011 at 10:20 PM It is the best of the seasons but for what follows. Well writ.

Kash Poet October 22, 2011 at 8:43 PM Nice imagery in this sweet poem.Best wishes.Will send a soupmail soon.

Elizabeth Wesley October 22, 2011 at 8:16 PM Hi sweetie, October splendidly adorned in your lovely verse. I would make the same request - perpetually- It is always too short.