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This Country That I Love

as i sit to write right by my window open to the night and all its sounds I hear outside the cracking of fireworks already being fired before the celebration of the 4th of July our cherished Independence Day! And I wish to cry for it seems the importance of the day is turned quite light folks play with fireworks but forget to remember why forget the dedication to the death of so many, their fight to ensure that this land beholds for all, the rights to the pursuit of happiness. May you have a wonderful 4th of July, remembring those who fought and died for your rights. CarolineCecile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 1:32:00 PM
Yes, you are right. We should be forget the sacrifices of those who fought for the country, Caroline
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:08:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Caroline. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:50:00 PM
a remarkable piece that makes us remember the fortitude of heroes who fought for independence, carol... happy liberty day next week... love the way you scribed this!:) huggs, nette
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