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This and That - Decastich

~This and That~ (Decastich) Life is short and the length of our life is not of our control. In our lifetime we often run and then we may fall. Some blame this and that, and make all kind of excuses, As we all turn the tables and sing sometimes the blues. These are some of the things that some of us do and choose. When we hear a sad report or some bad news, Let's remove from our minds what we can not use, And treat with care/appreciate what we don't want to lose, Because great things in life you wish only to produce, And the length and quality of life we shouldn't never misuse. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,06,2015
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Kiser Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Very deep truths and well written.
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Thank you ever so kindly M.L. K,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Horsman Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:09 AM
love this wonderful poetry,
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Thank you so much Harry! Much appreciated dear friend. Wishing you the best in 2015! :)Have a very lovely day! God bless! Love and hugs! xxx D.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Yes D we should not compromise on the quality of life. The length of life of course is of God's providence. You have a strong sense of synergism pervading all through. Specially I mention the use of pictures. I love to believe the lips and eyes in pic are all yours.Take care. Hugs! -rajat
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Thank you so much Rajat! Much appreciated dear friend. Wishing you the best in 2015! :)Have a very lovely day! God bless! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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