William Kelii Kekaula Poet Acrostic

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This All Could Be

This All Could Be
AtTractions of the urban surfer,
ExHibits at the shored enclaves,
AbIde the faithful their sole journey,
BaSking rays of summer's retreat,

CoAstal clutter of crowds roll on,
CeLebrities of the day made true,
LuLled breaks in surf even the tide,

NeCks swivels as eyes scouts the beach,
GoOd times are roaring inland,
MoUnting waves indulges the brave,
DeLving surfs stirs the underwater sands,
DaD's and mom's diligently relaxed a tad,

InBounds revitalize the distracted weary,
EvE set in submission of the day's exchange.

2019 September 04

*3rd Place*

Pick A Title, Vol 8 - Acrostic
~~Edward Ibeh
3. This All Could Be

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Connie Marcum Wong September 9, 2019 at 5:42 AM Congratulations on your win William! You know how much I loved this entry. xxoo William Kelii Kekaula September 9, 2019 at 5:48 AM You have my deepest appreciation Connie--THANKS again, ~ Aloha alway William

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2019 at 10:05 PM Excellent poem and such an original. Many blessings and congratulations. William Kelii Kekaula September 7, 2019 at 11:48 PM My heartfelt thanks ~ Aloha always William

Edward Ibeh September 7, 2019 at 12:13 PM This ingeneous acrostic caught my eye, William:-) It must've been quite challenging coming up with this! Congratulations on your win in my contest! William Kelii Kekaula September 7, 2019 at 12:44 PM Thanks, Edward--as I was out, needed to make a mental note to be on top as much ~ Aloha always William

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2019 at 5:41 PM wow, that would be super difficult to do it on the third letter in. Very original, William. WELL done. William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2019 at 8:46 PM Thanks, Andrea--I noted a comment to self...

Sandra Adams September 4, 2019 at 4:45 PM This is brilliant...i am sure it took some thought to get this to work out but you penned this one wonderfully...i didn't know it was your birthday, happy birthday... hugs :) William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2019 at 8:45 PM Thanks, Sandra--I noted a comment to self...

Connie Marcum Wong September 4, 2019 at 3:05 PM Happy Birthday to you William! I wasn't able to post this yesterday. I love the unique way you have written this acrostic. A masterful entry that I am faving! Birthday blessings and Aloha William. xxoo William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2019 at 8:48 PM Thanks 4 FAVE!, Connie--I noted a comment to self...