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This All Could Be AtTractions of the urban surfer, ExHibits at the shored enclaves, AbIde the faithful their sole journey, BaSking rays of summer's retreat, CoAstal clutter of crowds roll on, CeLebrities of the day made true, LuLled breaks in surf even the tide, NeCks swivels as eyes scouts the beach, GoOd times are roaring inland, MoUnting waves indulges the brave, DeLving surfs stirs the underwater sands, DaD's and mom's diligently relaxed a tad, InBounds revitalize the distracted weary, EvE set in submission of the day's exchange. 2019 September 04 *3rd Place* Pick A Title, Vol 8 - Acrostic ~~Edward Ibeh 3. This All Could Be

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2019 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win William! You know how much I loved this entry. xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/9/2019 5:48:00 AM

You have my deepest appreciation Connie--THANKS again, ~ Aloha alway William

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2019 10:05:00 PM

Excellent poem and such an original. Many blessings and congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/7/2019 11:48:00 PM

My heartfelt thanks ~ Aloha always William

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/7/2019 12:13:00 PM

This ingeneous acrostic caught my eye, William:-) It must've been quite challenging coming up with this! Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/7/2019 12:44:00 PM

Thanks, Edward--as I was out, needed to make a mental note to be on top as much ~ Aloha always William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2019 5:41:00 PM

wow, that would be super difficult to do it on the third letter in. Very original, William. WELL done.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/4/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea--I noted a comment to self...

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/4/2019 4:45:00 PM

This is brilliant...i am sure it took some thought to get this to work out but you penned this one wonderfully...i didn't know it was your birthday, happy birthday... hugs :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/4/2019 8:45:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra--I noted a comment to self...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2019 3:05:00 PM

Happy Birthday to you William! I wasn't able to post this yesterday. I love the unique way you have written this acrostic. A masterful entry that I am faving! Birthday blessings and Aloha William. xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/4/2019 8:48:00 PM

Thanks 4 FAVE!, Connie--I noted a comment to self...