This

I never seem 
To stop –
Thinking
Day in, day out
And then,
I try to remember
What’s it all about?

Exhaustion only 
Brings my sleep
A state I want
The most!
Questions, I have
Questions –
Answers that I doubt?

Feelings always
Feelings-
Changing like the wind
All over,
Supposing, asking, sensing 
Again –
Just shut up and shout!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/16/2010 10:42:00 PM
Wow!!! The thought is very deep!!!! The way you wrote this is very loving!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!!!! thanks for reading and commenting on my poem!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:32:00 PM
shouting can sometimes be the founding out factor of things. great write, hope you have a wonderful night. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/10/2010 3:14:00 PM
... Dave, laughed as I read, nay! thought along ... questioning with doubts the on-goings around now ... seems, you threw some light ... thanks a lot ... Canny
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:43:00 AM
I tend to overthink things, too, David, and these thoughts can make for sleepless nights. Really relate to your thoughts in this compelling poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:36:00 PM
great write, enjoyed
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:21:00 PM
Often things go that way like a time of uncertainty before something great comes about. I think the whole world is in this kind of place right now. We can all relate. Great write, David! And thanks for your great comments on my latest.
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