This

I never seem 
To stop –
Thinking
Day in, day out
And then,
I try to remember
What’s it all about?

Exhaustion only 
Brings my sleep
A state I want
The most!
Questions, I have
Questions –
Answers that I doubt?

Feelings always
Feelings-
Changing like the wind
All over,
Supposing, asking, sensing 
Again –
Just shut up and shout!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Thaker Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 10:42 PM
Wow!!! The thought is very deep!!!! The way you wrote this is very loving!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!!!! thanks for reading and commenting on my poem!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
Chachere Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:32 PM
shouting can sometimes be the founding out factor of things. great write, hope you have a wonderful night. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Amah Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 3:14 PM
... Dave, laughed as I read, nay! thought along ... questioning with doubts the on-goings around now ... seems, you threw some light ... thanks a lot ... Canny
Devonshire Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 7:43 AM
I tend to overthink things, too, David, and these thoughts can make for sleepless nights. Really relate to your thoughts in this compelling poem! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:36 PM
great write, enjoyed
Delacroix Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Often things go that way like a time of uncertainty before something great comes about. I think the whole world is in this kind of place right now. We can all relate. Great write, David! And thanks for your great comments on my latest.
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