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I never seem To stop – Thinking Day in, day out And then, I try to remember What’s it all about? Exhaustion only Brings my sleep A state I want The most! Questions, I have Questions – Answers that I doubt? Feelings always Feelings- Changing like the wind All over, Supposing, asking, sensing Again – Just shut up and shout!

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Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/16/2010 10:42:00 PM

Wow!!! The thought is very deep!!!! The way you wrote this is very loving!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!!!! thanks for reading and commenting on my poem!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/11/2010 11:32:00 PM

shouting can sometimes be the founding out factor of things. great write, hope you have a wonderful night. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Canny Amah

Date: 7/10/2010 3:14:00 PM

... Dave, laughed as I read, nay! thought along ... questioning with doubts the on-goings around now ... seems, you threw some light ... thanks a lot ... Canny

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2010 7:43:00 AM

I tend to overthink things, too, David, and these thoughts can make for sleepless nights. Really relate to your thoughts in this compelling poem! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/9/2010 9:36:00 PM

great write, enjoyed

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/9/2010 9:21:00 PM

Often things go that way like a time of uncertainty before something great comes about. I think the whole world is in this kind of place right now. We can all relate. Great write, David! And thanks for your great comments on my latest.