Thirty Something Alchemy




          Thirty Something Alchemy

    Are some of us beyond those years?
    Days of having children, spouses,
    working, and lovers quarrels and tears.

    Nights of staying out till three am at a
    party!
    When arrogant you flashed your wits
    ~ such a big smarty!

    Days and nights when you were able 
    to eat anything at all.
    And you loved showing off "you" at 
    the shining ball, dance hall?

    This poetess spent her Chicago days and
    nights like this.
    Filled with camaraderie, dances and
    yes something very unique, that
    much awaited for good night kiss.

   All vanished now in a dreamlike cloud.
   But the beat goes on within in her!
   After all, she is hardly wearing a
   shroud!

   Wondering if there are other poets 
   like her, who dream of such?
   And just for one day, just maybe...
   Have just a taste of their past's most
   magical touch?

   

     5/20/2019
     10:30am  PST
 
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:52 AM
I knew this was about you, even before I looked to see who wrote it!
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Well, I wonder why)))) Thanks Caren for backing me. Gee, I forget all my earlier Poems, do you? Panagiota xx
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:36 PM
"Et, tu, Gershon!" charming as always. Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:57 PM
About me it is written: "The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak." LOL. Thanks for stirring the embers (of the fire in the belly) a bit with this charming write. ~ gw
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:39 PM
See above box for reply. Time to replenish ye olde coffee cup! Panagiota Thank you for all the comments!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:20 PM
It is so important that the "beat goes on". " But the beat goes on within in her!" EXACTLY WRITE!
Romios Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:34 PM
So true, Caren Thank you for the visits Panagiota
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Reminiscent of the good old days of youth and celebration..an excellent flashback to the days of wonderment and joy..so well written, Panagiota.
Romios Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Oh, yes, Vitay! Magic days of youth.and your comment is so exhilarating to this poet who at times thinks I should not even be on this site. This poem encapsulates part of my life in seconds.glad you got it.. Thank you Panagiota
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