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Thirty Something Alchemy

          Thirty Something Alchemy     Are some of us beyond those years?     Days of having children, spouses,     working, and lovers quarrels and tears.     Nights of staying out till three am at a     party!     When arrogant you flashed your wits     ~ such a big smarty!     Days and nights when you were able      to eat anything at all.     And you loved showing off "you" at      the shining ball, dance hall?     This poetess spent her Chicago days and     nights like this.     Filled with camaraderie, dances and     yes something very unique, that     much awaited for good night kiss.    All vanished now in a dreamlike cloud.    But the beat goes on within in her!    After all, she is hardly wearing a    shroud!    Wondering if there are other poets     like her, who dream of such?    And just for one day, just maybe...    Have just a taste of their past's most    magical touch?     5/20/2019    10:30am PST  

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Date: 1/16/2020 7:52:00 AM
I knew this was about you, even before I looked to see who wrote it!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 11:25:00 AM
Well, I wonder why)))) Thanks Caren for backing me. Gee, I forget all my earlier Poems, do you? Panagiota xx
Date: 5/21/2019 5:36:00 PM
"Et, tu, Gershon!" charming as always. Panagiota
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Date: 5/21/2019 4:57:00 PM
About me it is written: "The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak." LOL. Thanks for stirring the embers (of the fire in the belly) a bit with this charming write. ~ gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/21/2019 5:39:00 PM
See above box for reply. Time to replenish ye olde coffee cup! Panagiota Thank you for all the comments!
Date: 5/21/2019 2:20:00 PM
It is so important that the "beat goes on". " But the beat goes on within in her!" EXACTLY WRITE!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/21/2019 2:34:00 PM
So true, Caren Thank you for the visits Panagiota
Date: 5/20/2019 3:12:00 PM
Reminiscent of the good old days of youth and celebration..an excellent flashback to the days of wonderment and joy..so well written, Panagiota.
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Date: 5/20/2019 3:23:00 PM
Oh, yes, Vitay! Magic days of youth.and your comment is so exhilarating to this poet who at times thinks I should not even be on this site. This poem encapsulates part of my life in seconds.glad you got it.. Thank you Panagiota

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