Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Thirteen syllables or less. ponds wear in sunrise nelumbo luteas 10 syllables checked at www.how many syllables.com P.S--Nelumbo lutea is an American yellow coloured lotus that opens every morning and closes in the afternoon.The flower petals open to expose a large yellow,flat topped seed pod.It grows 3 to 6 feet tall. Contest:Thirteen syllables or less. Sponsor:Timothy Hicks. 31 March 2016
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Callus Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Rizwana! You presented a lovely picture; nelumbo luteas are beautiful and they match the rising sun, too (I admit I looked them up before commenting!). ~ Regards // paul
Bhurani Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thank you.....nature's beauty has no bounds....gives us so much....asks for little care....good day
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:58 PM
a gorgeous gem. Congrats on this one.
Bhurani Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Thanks ...wonderful comment...best wishes
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Yet another lovely win Rizwana.. big congrats!!
Bhurani Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:34 AM
thanks DOC.....best wishes
A   Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Enjoyable haiku Rizwana. LINDA
Bhurani Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:28 AM
thank you....regards
May Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Congrats on your win!
Bhurani Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:28 AM
thank you ,,regards
Kimathi Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Hi Rizwana. Congrats for your WIN with this beautiful haiku!!!! ;-)
Bhurani Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:26 AM
thank you for your appreciation....regards
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Very lovely Rizwana. Congratulations on your placement! #7. ;)
Bhurani Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:25 AM
grateful for your comment..regards
Hicks Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Congrats Rizwana! Thanks for introducing to me a new flower here. Love the color contrast with yellow ... sunrise, nelumbo luteas < It's such a beautiful sounding word.
Bhurani Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:24 AM
Oh....my pleasure to be a part of this contest....thank you...regards
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