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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Brussels bombed Battered souls Silent tongues ____________________________ For Second Chance #2 Sponsored by: Broken Wings Originally received N/A in the Thirteen Syllables or Less Contest Judged on 31/3/2016 In Poetry Soup

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Date: 4/27/2016 11:27:00 PM
PROBIR, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 4/2/2016 9:19:00 PM
This was a thought provoking poem about a very tragic topic. The "silent tongues" gave me chills. Nothing wrong with this poem, I was just looking more for nature poems (haiku), where as this was more geared towards the human world and foibles (senryu) ... Sometime in the future I'll do a contest similar to this one again, but be more lenient on subject matter! Thanks for participating and I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/4/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Timothy. You are right...
Date: 4/1/2016 7:14:00 PM
A deep one, Probir. Sad one too.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2016 1:05:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 3/31/2016 7:46:00 PM
deep haiku Probir... LINDA
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/31/2016 8:40:00 PM
Right ! Thank you...
Date: 3/31/2016 3:01:00 AM
This is excellent Probir. It should do well in the contest my friend! #7 ;)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/31/2016 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Connie...

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