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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

from a night's journey--
I return with a lamp
and songs


Thirteen Syllables or Less
31 April 2016
Sponsor  Timothy Hicks

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Nette Onclaud

April 7, 2016 at 2:04 AM

omg, this is tremendous!...congrats on your top award, manny..huggs

Stephen Pennell

April 1, 2016 at 6:19 AM

congrats on your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:08 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Manny..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:08 AM

Pls check the date of poem written below

Suzanne Delaney

April 1, 2016 at 1:30 AM

Congratulations on your top placement. The songs are important. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2016 at 1:00 AM

this is really nice, Manny. Congrats for your top win.

Sathya Babu

March 31, 2016 at 8:54 PM

Loved this. Many Congratulations on this TOP WIN....

Jan Allison

March 31, 2016 at 7:47 AM

such wonderful imagery Manny many congrats on your win:-) hugs janxx

Teddy Kimathi

March 31, 2016 at 5:25 AM

That sounds like an enlightened person to me... Congrats Manny, for your inspirational first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 3:31 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Manny. Outstanding! ; )

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:06 AM

Congrats Manny on your First Place win! There is a lot of subtext in this haiku, between line 1 and 2. I somehow imagined it to be a romantic evening with you returning with songs. But in any case it's up to our imaginations to interpret. Masterful haiku!

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