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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

from a night's journey-- I return with a lamp and songs Thirteen Syllables or Less 31 April 2016 Sponsor Timothy Hicks

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/7/2016 2:04:00 AM

omg, this is tremendous!...congrats on your top award, manny..huggs

Stephen Pennell

Date: 4/1/2016 6:19:00 AM

congrats on your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:08:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Manny..

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:08:00 AM

Pls check the date of poem written below

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/1/2016 1:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your top placement. The songs are important. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 1:00:00 AM

this is really nice, Manny. Congrats for your top win.

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/31/2016 8:54:00 PM

Loved this. Many Congratulations on this TOP WIN....

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 7:47:00 AM

such wonderful imagery Manny many congrats on your win:-) hugs janxx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 5:25:00 AM

That sounds like an enlightened person to me... Congrats Manny, for your inspirational first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/31/2016 3:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Manny. Outstanding! ; )

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 3:06:00 AM

Congrats Manny on your First Place win! There is a lot of subtext in this haiku, between line 1 and 2. I somehow imagined it to be a romantic evening with you returning with songs. But in any case it's up to our imaginations to interpret. Masterful haiku!