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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

mist shrouded morn
appears to hide all
hawks circle

naturehaiku

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Tom Arnone

April 19, 2016 at 10:29 AM

Beautiful haiku. Great imagery.

Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2016 at 8:04 PM

good one, Stefanie. Congrats on the HM

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:26 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Stefanie..

Stefanie Miller

March 31, 2016 at 8:55 AM

Thank you ALL for the warm welcome and wonderful comments!!! I have not written for awhile and am excited to get back to it. It seems like this is the perfect site to do this on; everyone seems so encouraging and positive. I am looking forward to writing more and getting to know you other Poets. Thanks again!

Teddy Kimathi

March 31, 2016 at 8:25 AM

Beautiful imagery! Congrats for your awesome WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Stefanie Miller

March 31, 2016 at 8:57 AM

Thanks so much- so excited!! :)

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:32 AM

Congrats Stefanie! Dangerous, is what came to mind when reading this haiku. Just another day in the animal kingdom (I wonder what lies beneath the mist)

Stefanie Miller

March 31, 2016 at 8:56 AM

Thanks so much for the placing of my poem!!! I am so excited! That was the first contest I have ever entered; looking forward to entering more!

Winged Warrior

March 30, 2016 at 9:23 PM

Great haiku...Welcome aboard Stefanie...put on your seat belts...its going to be a great ride...god bless...^WW^

Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2016 at 10:50 PM

Great haiku, Stefanie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@