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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

morning dew clings
silk dances in the breeze
deadly threads



Contest: Thirteen Syllables Or Less
Sponsored By: Timothy Hicks
Written: 3/29/2016

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:23 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Greg..

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2016 at 8:48 PM

hmmm, that last line is mysterious to me, but it makes for a great twist. I see it won. BIG congrats to you. (ha, I looked below to see Tim's comment to you. Can't believe I did not think of spiderweb)

Teddy Kimathi

March 31, 2016 at 8:35 AM

Greetings Greg. Congrats for your wonderful WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:25 AM

Congrats Greg! It certainly would be deadly if a spider was still hanging on! I get a panoramic view with this poem ... the clinging of the grass, and the flight of the threads. Well done!