Nick Bagnall Poet Rhyme

Thirteen Fine Thoroughbreds - Tongue-Twister

Through the forest tear thirteen fine thoroughbreds
Fraught with tension they flick their fair heads
Thrashing through the thickest thickets fittest first
Thundering from forest for the fields they thirst
Freed from their flight they finish together
Thirteen fine thoroughbreds frolic forever





Contest : Twist my Tongue
Sponsored by:  Nina Parmenter
8th Place

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Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2020 at 9:14 AM I like your twist, congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:07 PM Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:33 PM Nick what I really like about yours is that it told a really cool story and was grammatical as well as using alliteration as a good tongue twister does. Congrats in the contest. this was one of my favorites.

Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:10 PM a fab tongue twister and such fun alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith January 21, 2020 at 5:54 PM Great fun trying to say this Nick, congrats. :)

Wendy Watson January 19, 2020 at 10:45 AM Hello, Nick I've read through quite a few poets' examples with no hesitation but you definitely tripped me up 'through the thickest thickets!' Well done!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2020 at 12:20 PM Hello Nick Bagnall, so nice to meet you. Yes this is a tongue twister. Fun to read. Have a nice day my friend.

Jenish Somadas January 16, 2020 at 10:56 AM In the third line my tongue twist..then I troubled at every word to read..lol..Great entry in the contest.. Nick Bagnall January 16, 2020 at 11:11 AM Thanks for the thoughts :)