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Thirsty Wet Dream

Searching for water. Lost spring at bottom of hill. Anticipation.

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Colleen Bono

Date: 2/11/2010 7:55:00 AM

Nice title.The poem wasn't what I was thinking when I saw the title.Nice job.I have 2 for you to look at.IT'S A BOY,and OUR PRECIOUS GIFT.If you get a chance take a look.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/5/2010 8:30:00 PM

I love the title for this. it would attract many people if it were to be in a book or even a title of a novel.because the title sound so peaceful and wonderful, i think of water flowing softly. and beautiful image. -Always Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/5/2010 3:02:00 PM

very good!! light & Love

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/5/2010 12:28:00 PM

Great Haiku, Marty. It makes me thirsty, too. Thanks for sharing.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/5/2010 8:32:00 AM

I can feel the emotions here. The anxiety and then relief! Great Haiku. Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/4/2010 5:07:00 PM

makes me thirsty.

Gypse Summers

Date: 2/2/2010 1:15:00 PM

really good use of words in a tight form and really good haiku marty

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/2/2010 3:56:00 AM

Marty this piece is left wide open for suggestion, nice enjoyed it Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 9:49:00 AM

Interesting Haiku that you have presented here. Sounds like you are looking forward to spring. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 8:01:00 AM

Water is the liquid of life itself.. all "waters" are beneficial..especially the heavenly kind.. great write my friend Marty.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/1/2010 4:25:00 AM

I want some too..... I am thirsty......:JP]