Home » Poems » Marty Owens » Thirsty Wet Dream

Thirsty Wet Dream

Searching for water.
Lost spring at bottom of hill.
Anticipation.

hopelifenatureupliftinghaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Colleen Bono

February 11, 2010 at 7:55 AM

Nice title.The poem wasn't what I was thinking when I saw the title.Nice job.I have 2 for you to look at.IT'S A BOY,and OUR PRECIOUS GIFT.If you get a chance take a look.

Lynette Chachere

February 5, 2010 at 8:30 PM

I love the title for this. it would attract many people if it were to be in a book or even a title of a novel.because the title sound so peaceful and wonderful, i think of water flowing softly. and beautiful image. -Always Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

February 5, 2010 at 3:02 PM

very good!! light & Love

Kim Hilliker

February 5, 2010 at 12:28 PM

Great Haiku, Marty. It makes me thirsty, too. Thanks for sharing.

Audrey Haick

February 5, 2010 at 8:32 AM

I can feel the emotions here. The anxiety and then relief! Great Haiku. Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

February 4, 2010 at 5:07 PM

makes me thirsty.

Gypse Summers

February 2, 2010 at 1:15 PM

really good use of words in a tight form and really good haiku marty

Daniel Cheeseman

February 2, 2010 at 3:56 AM

Marty this piece is left wide open for suggestion, nice enjoyed it Daniel

Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2010 at 9:49 AM

Interesting Haiku that you have presented here. Sounds like you are looking forward to spring. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara