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Thirsty

Lord, I don't want water... I want a new beginning a better way for things to be I am thirsty in soul I am thirsty spiritually I can love with my whole heart body and mind but will it be recipricated...in this lifetime I laugh because its not about conquests that I can do, have done...ain't no thang for none have I ever really truly sang though others sing to me... all I utter from my lips... with all the drinks I have had... I am still THIRSTY

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Date: 11/17/2009 5:12:00 PM
Kathy you may be in luck, take a look at my poem "Two Thousand Twelve" and let me know what you think. The better way, I think is on it's way. I think a lot of people are, as you, ready for a change. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/17/2009 4:37:00 PM
Love the first four lines. Seriously written look to be filled. Keep writing. Sara
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