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Thirsting Heart Beats

Thirsting Heart Beats By Nate Spears Published 2013 in “Death OF A Rose” By Nate Spears During a moment in your deepest desires do I ever cross your thoughts in mind for rehire, while you’re clutching on your sheets of fire cold and lonely wanting to hold me throughout the night awaking into several dreams of a separation without me in your life This is bought to a reality by a lack of understanding of a heart given in entirety my love, my compassion, my good times you insisted it was all a lie I never claimed a proclamation of perfect I’m wrapped in your bundle of hurting and burdens from opposed late love bad decisions hoping and wishing that all is not lost in the cause of two wrongs that were never made right giving no guarantees so what we adore is always subject to a slip, beneath our feet and on the way down we reach a thirsting heart that beats loneliness.

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Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 AM
Nate are you writing to me? LOL. As you can see I am hooked on your poems. Such real writing. I relate.
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Date: 2/27/2013 8:17:00 AM
:) You were exactly who I was thinking of when I wrote this piece!!! Great Minds Think a like <3 Unfortunately in life miscommunication and misunderstanding can bring us a lot of grief and pain. Just taking a minute to understand one another with an open mind, we will come to understand we have more in common than we know existed. Thanks for taking a minute to read my work and thanks for the kinds comments. It's a blessing to have the opportunity to meet you and get to know you as well :) You are very talented and one of my new favorite writers!!! <3 I love your work!!!
Date: 2/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
Enjoyed the read....deep thoughts here on a relationship.
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Date: 2/20/2013 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Debra, It's a half and half poem. Half of the poem is very real to myself, and half is just very real to life. Thanks for taking a minute to check it out.

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