Kabuteng P.Ink K. Poet Grook

Thirst (Grook-Y Look-Y)

the thirst for knowledge
makes one drown in mysteries
the thirst for happiness
makes one drown in miseries 


** July 13, 2010---I'm writing this with a half-asleep 
brain golly can anyone tell me if this is better --
pretty please? Shucks such a puzzle why I can't
grasp this form?? I need to sleep!! & the wind's 
howling outside too!!! Thanks for all who'll give their insights
^_^

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Poet Destroyer A July 16, 2010 at 7:05 AM WOW!!!! your brain is impressive even when you are half a sleep..enjoyed it Nikko,,,and i will wait ,, for you to serve me anoth spam...loll,,slam,, i mean,,kidding,..p.d, ((((believe it or not this one is going to my faves as well.. I can not let Andrea enjoy by herself.. It was super awesome..trully))

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2010 at 5:52 PM TO FAVS!!!!

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2010 at 9:43 PM NIKKO THIS is much better as a GROOK. I am sure this would be similar to the type the famous Grook poet would have even penned! I'm so happy to see you figured it out. I was here longer than I wanted to be (of course) but less time than NORMAL haha. I gotta hurry off here now. Will just try to get up early to see contest wininers. Luv, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey July 13, 2010 at 8:43 AM This is half asleep, how do you do when your half awake? It's a wonderful write, good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2010 at 7:38 AM WINNER my sweet friend.. Charles need look any further.. this is spectacular... good luck ... and thankxxx for the congrats.. we may 'tie the knot' in Italy.. not sure yet.. things are moving very fast.. leaving it in God's Hands... appreciate my friend... with luv..

Diiamond Rich July 13, 2010 at 7:36 AM Enjoyed the title and poem here.. reminded me of something great I read last year. Have a great day.