Third Person

she is the shield
            
                               slaying i

                          i might just die






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Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 3:20 PM
I-nteresting! :)
One Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 3:01 PM
This is clever...loved iT.. I see signs of intelligence lol
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you & hugs galore! xomo
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:51 PM
hurry, you, second person to the rescue!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:46 AM
LOL! <3 <3 <3
Theraven Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Maureen, He thought it was good poem. Didn't you think so too? I don't know about you two, but I thought it was an excellent Senryu. -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Giggles ;D, I think he killed it. xomo
Mcferran Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Rhona LOVES this!! <3 (Third person does feel terribly odd and alienating!) FAV! ;)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Thank Rhona for me! ;D, I've used it a couple of times, deliberate alienation perhaps. Hugs! xomo
Connelly Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Thus is great Maureen!!! Your third person killing your first person. What a battle of the ego. Love this one. Thanks Maureen.
Connelly Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Hahaha never too old Maureen!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:06 AM
I wrote a poem in she, but it was me. Someone fell in love with her. I was thinking about when I use the third person, what I'm revealing in hiding. And then slaying with liberty, I'm probably too old to slay. ;), xomo!
Poetry Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 11:21 AM
or live!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Lol! I know, my muse can be so dramatic at times ;), xomo!
Green Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:21 AM
I hate to be the fourth person in this mix, but nicely done Maureen. : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Giggles! Thank you my friend :o) xomo!
May Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Oh Maureen you can't die who would read my poetry? Deep you write and my mind wonders whenever I read your work! Your talent with few words truly overwhelms me, Excellent my sweet friend!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:29 AM
You are too sweet! Thank you so much Bobby! :))) xomo!
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