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Third Person

she is the shield slaying i i might just die ***

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2019 3:20:00 PM

I-nteresting! :)

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2019 3:01:00 PM

This is clever...loved iT.. I see signs of intelligence lol

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2019 7:46:00 AM

Thank you & hugs galore! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2019 8:51:00 PM

hurry, you, second person to the rescue!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2019 7:46:00 AM

LOL! <3 <3 <3

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/4/2019 10:50:00 AM

Maureen, He thought it was good poem. Didn't you think so too? I don't know about you two, but I thought it was an excellent Senryu. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2019 7:45:00 AM

Giggles ;D, I think he killed it. xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/2/2019 10:24:00 PM

Rhona LOVES this!! <3 (Third person does feel terribly odd and alienating!) FAV! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2019 7:08:00 AM

Thank Rhona for me! ;D, I've used it a couple of times, deliberate alienation perhaps. Hugs! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/2/2019 5:46:00 PM

Thus is great Maureen!!! Your third person killing your first person. What a battle of the ego. Love this one. Thanks Maureen.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/3/2019 1:35:00 PM

Hahaha never too old Maureen!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/3/2019 7:06:00 AM

I wrote a poem in she, but it was me. Someone fell in love with her. I was thinking about when I use the third person, what I'm revealing in hiding. And then slaying with liberty, I'm probably too old to slay. ;), xomo!

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/2/2019 11:21:00 AM

or live!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2019 11:54:00 AM

Lol! I know, my muse can be so dramatic at times ;), xomo!

Chris Green

Date: 10/2/2019 9:21:00 AM

I hate to be the fourth person in this mix, but nicely done Maureen. : )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2019 9:30:00 AM

Giggles! Thank you my friend :o) xomo!

Bobby May

Date: 10/2/2019 9:10:00 AM

Oh Maureen you can't die who would read my poetry? Deep you write and my mind wonders whenever I read your work! Your talent with few words truly overwhelms me, Excellent my sweet friend!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/2/2019 9:29:00 AM

You are too sweet! Thank you so much Bobby! :))) xomo!