Thinking Out Loud

Thinking Out loud

_______________
_______________
_

I am yours, flesh 
and blood

gave to you, from 
God above

Here I am, but you 
are not

don't forget, what 
you have got.



All these years, 
we've been apart

I hurt you, cause 
you broke my heart

a little girl, I'm not 
anymore

years have passed, 
just like before.



Time for a change, 
one would think,

talk to me, and not 
the drink

A firstborn, who's 
been the last

hope for the 
present, hate for 
the past.



There's is others, I 
can see

if your there for 
them, be there for 
me

Do they know, 
cause I exist

even if ...I'm 
the bottom on your list.



7/2/14- Jessica 
Thompson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/4/2014 1:05:00 AM
Oh Jess is this based on real life because it is so sad, I got quite emotional when I read it, take care my friend............Vera..........
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 7/4/2014 11:56:00 PM
Yeah, my Dad has never really been around ever, and when it was it was brief. He just upsets me to no ends. But anyways..life is life and I go on. Thank you for stoping by my dear friend. Take care~ Jess :)
Date: 7/3/2014 8:29:00 AM
Oh girl, wow, emotional! Great to read you, Happy hugs :) :)
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 7/3/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, always have an nice time reading your wonderful comments. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 7/3/2014 12:40:00 AM
this one BURNED ME. I Feel You SOOOO much on this! So much, In fact, I avoid writing poems on this off limits subject, Like the PLAGUE. One day, I will spew out the madness like u did here PoeteSS! I commend you for thinking out loud on this one, It is Brave, It hurts, it sucks, and damn if it don't make for BRILLIANT POETRY! Keep flyin', ridin' that magic carpet, Poetic GENIE-ous!~JSL 7rate all day with this hot joint. FIRE~
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Jessica Thompson
Date: 7/3/2014 8:04:00 PM
JSL, Thank you so much for coming by and commenting. I really appreciate all you kind words. I am sorry that you have been there too, in this situation. I feel like when I write...I can get anything off my chest. Thanks my new friend~ Take care~ Jess
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