Thinking Less

What if for a day that we just stop thinking, about all of the things that make us feel sinking.
How would you feel deep down inside,
Would it fill you with all sorts of pride.
We keep wrecking our brain's wondering why, things like this happen so we sit and we cry. 
But if you are positive for just a day,
Your thoughts will get better in more than one way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 20, 2016 at 6:35 AM
I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7
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