Thinking

I spend days thinking about you, soft and gentle, with an angels perfect lips
Wasting my time waiting until the balance finally tips
The moments i have around you make me lose control
All the feelings breaking free to lacerate my broken soul
You make it impossible to think or simply even breathe
just ask me too and i will turn around and leave
I cant die or even live this way
Without knowing what i should say
I could just keep staring into your eyes
Or break apart these precious lives
when im so in love with...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Liwayway Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 8:58 PM
nice composition friend Charlie...Thanks for sharing...
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:44 AM
This is a sweet, soft and lovely LOVE poem - Well written Charlie. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Charlie very romantic...I like it..David
Hu Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:10 AM
It happens sometime .Good luck
A   Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 9:56 PM
Charlie, it is hard, and beautiful to feel this way... thinking at times gets me into trouble... with my self that IS!!! The more i fall when I'm thinking, the more i long for the real feeling of love. Hope you don't have to feel the heartache your afraid off... xox~ PD
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