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I spend days thinking about you, soft and gentle, with an angels perfect lips Wasting my time waiting until the balance finally tips The moments i have around you make me lose control All the feelings breaking free to lacerate my broken soul You make it impossible to think or simply even breathe just ask me too and i will turn around and leave I cant die or even live this way Without knowing what i should say I could just keep staring into your eyes Or break apart these precious lives when im so in love with...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/24/2012 8:58:00 PM
nice composition friend Charlie...Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:44:00 AM
This is a sweet, soft and lovely LOVE poem - Well written Charlie. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:41:00 AM
Charlie very romantic...I like it..David
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:10:00 AM
It happens sometime .Good luck
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Date: 8/15/2012 9:56:00 PM
Charlie, it is hard, and beautiful to feel this way... thinking at times gets me into trouble... with my self that IS!!! The more i fall when I'm thinking, the more i long for the real feeling of love. Hope you don't have to feel the heartache your afraid off... xox~ PD
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