Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Thinking 2-18-10

i see you look at me,

and for a second. . .
 
i cant look away. 

your eyes are cool and mysterious,

and leave my soul hurting. 

you dont bother with lieing smiles,

only look away when the connection becomes too much.

but my eyes keep wandering back to yours,

only to find that you arent looking again. 

and again, i wonder why did you even glance my way in the beginning. 

and again i wonder, what are you thinking.

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Destiny Echo February 19, 2010 at 12:43 PM This is a good one. This happens to me all the time! Great work. Keep It Up :D -Echo

Adrian Torbenson February 19, 2010 at 10:42 AM very nice poem i could see the scene could just feel what it would have been like to be there good poem keep writtin

Carol Sunshine Brown February 19, 2010 at 8:25 AM Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem with us today Rain. Love, Carol

Susan Palli February 19, 2010 at 3:40 AM we're all the same!

Matthew Miles February 18, 2010 at 7:47 PM It's so lovely to read your poems & see them progress. This one is possibly one of my favourites. Fleeting glances & stolen kisses. Keep writing hun. <3

Sara Kendrick February 18, 2010 at 4:53 PM Very alluring write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jay Smith February 18, 2010 at 1:15 PM Ahh, what I've come to expect of your poetry and so much more!!!