John Squires Poet Rhyme

Think You Know

Sounds of snowflakes smashing on the ground
Twenty bluebirds singing without sound
Snowcapped mountains on a level plain
Shouting softly in refrain
Soft lullaby’s amidst the crowd
When I whisper really loud
Is there smiling in the breeze
Captured in a well-planned sneeze
We all looked up from down below
Wondering we didn’t know
All is lost in memory
Looked so hard but couldn’t see
What’s that sound that’s passing by?
Sometimes we know but wonder why?

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Richard Michael February 26, 2015 at 11:30 AM thanks for the comment on fisher of men I like the use of opposites in this one loud whispers, snow smashing, mountains on a level plain, etc. really cool! John Squires March 2, 2015 at 9:52 PM Thanks Richard. I appreciate your comments too.

Steven Hanlon February 25, 2015 at 6:40 PM thanks john, thought-provoking and evocative John Squires March 2, 2015 at 9:53 PM Thank you. John Squires February 25, 2015 at 6:50 PM Thanks for your comments...I am glad you liked it.