Think Twice

This path they say is tough
though rough, some of `em say is bliss
those that have not seen, see they want to
those that have seen it all, teach they want to
if a man dies, will he live again?
do life and death have anything in common?
grandpa`s advise will always bring in some fright
get your shoes ready, cos` the world may end in the night`s hour
now this is the advise
"As you lay your rest, so you will pass through it"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 8, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Daniel , Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 2:59 PM
I like this very much, Daniel... Love Skat
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