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Things Unsaid

Regret
Bittersweet tears
Gently fall unremarked
An outpouring of emotion
Unheard

emotionslossremembercinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

January 13, 2015 at 3:57 PM

the last word used was really poignant on this cinquain!

Shane Cooper

January 13, 2015 at 4:26 PM

Thanks I found the form really easy to use, it was based on Something that was said to me a couple of days ago. Love Shane xxx

Pandita Sietesantos

January 13, 2015 at 12:47 PM

This is such a remarkable piece that I enjoyed reading! Excellent! Pandita.

Shane Cooper

January 13, 2015 at 12:51 PM

Thanks Pandita it is something that is very meaningful to me. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

January 13, 2015 at 7:31 AM

So few words can say so much:-) Great to be able to express our emotions through our poems Shane:-) Hugs Jan x

Shane Cooper

January 13, 2015 at 8:17 AM

Yes it is. I was thinking about what you said the other day and some songs which follow the same track. Thanks for the inspiration love Shanexxx

Laura Leiser

January 12, 2015 at 10:03 PM

Nice Cinquain, Shane. Well done!

Shane Cooper

January 13, 2015 at 12:54 AM

Thanks Laura, It was my first attempt at this form. love Shane xxx

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