Things That Make Me Sigh

Like in a dream,
in a flowered field we lie -
my lover by my side.
Sun is sliding down behind the hills
abandoning its violet-streaked sky.
Things that make me sigh.

By my side
in a birthing room is the guy
who made the sun come down!
He holds our newborn daughter in his arms.
I notice a tear forming in his eye.
Things that make me sigh.


It’s the wedding day
of the girl whose birth made my husband cry.
He is by her side
and giving her away to the handsome groom.
I ponder how the years do fly.
Things that make me sigh.

On our porch swing -
I and my love, who once was so spry!
He takes my hand.
We watch the moon replace the sun
that used to shine up in the sky so high.
Things that make me sigh.


July 12, 2021
for the 'What Makes You Sigh...' Poetry Contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke
Now for 'A BRIAN STRAND JULY 16' Poetry Contest
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Merryman Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 12:21 PM
A beautifully written, nostalgic journey through time. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
Poet Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations on your contest win Andrea, you deserve it with this charming poem. Blessings and kindest regards
Strand Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Andrea a prize winner + award in my contest 1011
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet story/write. "Love It" Enjoy your win with blessings.............
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 5:49 AM
What wonderful slices of lovely. The third stanza is my favourite. Hugs Rick.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:49 AM
How come I missed this beautiful creation?... As always great work from a great poetess... Enjoyed reading and hearty congrats dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Daniel Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:45 AM
Brilliant Writing, Andrea, congratulations on your well deserved win:)
Brul Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:44 AM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win dear Andrea!
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations Andrea
Poet Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your contest win Andrea, you penned a so beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 9:58 AM
It is something to see tears in a grown man’s eye. Strength and vulnerability in those tears. Shows a man that loves with fervor and fidelity! Congratulations, Andrea!
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Your sigh will score high in the sigh contest! brilliant work!!
Theraven Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Andrea, I know now, if ever a person asks me to explain the meaning in a sigh, I'll point them to this write. -Richard
Proxenos Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:33 PM
I love your poetry Andrea - your versatility is a sight to behold - bravo Andrea. hugs and blessing, Jennifer.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 9:23 AM
A journey through life. Yes males are emotional too. Well penned Andrea. All the best for contest
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 8:35 AM
This entire missive made me sigh. Gorgeous.
Skelly Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 3:43 AM
I often wonder at the speed life goes by. Youth seems only a heartbeat away and children are now adults....
Seeker Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Now, this is a truly outstanding poem! Sure shot winner, Andrea!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Four picturesque flashes of life. Made me sigh too. Hugs.
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:11 PM
A picturesque work. I can feel it. It makes me sigh.
Brul Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Ahhh, this poem makes me sigh dear Andrea!!! A fav for me!
Pandit Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Enjoyed the romantic voice of your poem, Andrea. The repeating line adds rhythms!
Cunningham Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Memorable moments from your life Andrea, captured well in your verse, Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your week. Tom
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July 12, 2021 at 9:54 AM
You purposely choose the meaningful seminal moments in life to sigh about Andrea, which in turn elevates your poem to another level, excellent writing as always, best wishes in the contest, cheers David
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