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Things That Make Me Sigh

Like in a dream, in a flowered field we lie - my lover by my side. Sun is sliding down behind the hills abandoning its violet-streaked sky. Things that make me sigh. By my side in a birthing room is the guy who made the sun come down! He holds our newborn daughter in his arms. I notice a tear forming in his eye. Things that make me sigh. It’s the wedding day of the girl whose birth made my husband cry. He is by her side and giving her away to the handsome groom. I ponder how the years do fly. Things that make me sigh. On our porch swing - I and my love, who once was so spry! He takes my hand. We watch the moon replace the sun that used to shine up in the sky so high. Things that make me sigh. July 12, 2021 for the 'What Makes You Sigh...' Poetry Contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke Now for 'A BRIAN STRAND JULY 16' Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/17/2021 12:21:00 PM
A beautifully written, nostalgic journey through time. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win Andrea, you deserve it with this charming poem. Blessings and kindest regards
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Date: 7/16/2021 10:31:00 PM
Andrea a prize winner + award in my contest 1011
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Date: 7/15/2021 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet story/write. "Love It" Enjoy your win with blessings.............
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Date: 7/15/2021 5:49:00 AM
What wonderful slices of lovely. The third stanza is my favourite. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/15/2021 2:49:00 AM
How come I missed this beautiful creation?... As always great work from a great poetess... Enjoyed reading and hearty congrats dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:45:00 AM
Brilliant Writing, Andrea, congratulations on your well deserved win:)
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:44:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win dear Andrea!
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Date: 7/14/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win Andrea, you penned a so beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/14/2021 9:58:00 AM
It is something to see tears in a grown man’s eye. Strength and vulnerability in those tears. Shows a man that loves with fervor and fidelity! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 7/14/2021 9:54:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2021 7:23:00 AM
Your sigh will score high in the sigh contest! brilliant work!!
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Date: 7/13/2021 9:00:00 PM
Andrea, I know now, if ever a person asks me to explain the meaning in a sigh, I'll point them to this write. -Richard
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Date: 7/13/2021 12:33:00 PM
I love your poetry Andrea - your versatility is a sight to behold - bravo Andrea. hugs and blessing, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/13/2021 9:23:00 AM
A journey through life. Yes males are emotional too. Well penned Andrea. All the best for contest
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Date: 7/13/2021 8:35:00 AM
This entire missive made me sigh. Gorgeous.
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Date: 7/13/2021 3:43:00 AM
I often wonder at the speed life goes by. Youth seems only a heartbeat away and children are now adults....
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Date: 7/13/2021 2:22:00 AM
Now, this is a truly outstanding poem! Sure shot winner, Andrea!
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Date: 7/12/2021 10:53:00 PM
Four picturesque flashes of life. Made me sigh too. Hugs.
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:11:00 PM
A picturesque work. I can feel it. It makes me sigh.
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Date: 7/12/2021 4:32:00 PM
Ahhh, this poem makes me sigh dear Andrea!!! A fav for me!
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Date: 7/12/2021 12:32:00 PM
Enjoyed the romantic voice of your poem, Andrea. The repeating line adds rhythms!
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Date: 7/12/2021 11:42:00 AM
Memorable moments from your life Andrea, captured well in your verse, Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your week. Tom
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Date: 7/12/2021 9:54:00 AM
You purposely choose the meaningful seminal moments in life to sigh about Andrea, which in turn elevates your poem to another level, excellent writing as always, best wishes in the contest, cheers David
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