Things Fall Apart

The look of paleness on each face
Hollow dreams and dismal fears
Injured wings the bough here deface
Nothing remains to dry dead tears
Governments shaken like old rags in old carts
Shadows follow the footsteps of cold hearts

From great empires careening down
Ancient errors come to vivid light
Little countries where wilted seeds are sown
Lust and litter fluttering against the night

Around the weary, wounded watchmen sleep
Palls of pillow, uncottoning economy
And arogance, the center folds on cruel history
Raging against the poor, the weak, they heap
Things that falls apart against the splinters of the heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 3/23/2009 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful..."Things that falls apart against the splinters of the heart"...I will surely read more.. Thank you for your comments. Always, D.N.
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:16:00 PM
Well written!!! Your title caught my eye as I enjoyed the novel thing fall apart by chinua achebe, and welcome (albeit late) to the soup! Peace Always Fzthima
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Date: 3/16/2009 10:11:00 AM
Very timely and appropriate, it shows you have enormous skill and intelligence, is well read as its well writ
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