Things

There are certain things in life
I couldn’t do without – 
Reading, music and a home
Where I can muck about.

Pencils, paper, ice cream, beer,
Coffee, bagels, cheese – 
Take them from me and you will
Have brought me to my knees.

Note, they’re objects I describe
Which sate my appetite.
For people, that would be
Another poem I’d have to write.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/21/2018 8:29:00 PM
...Where I can muck about … You have given me a smile which will last all evening with this wonderful line. Thank you, Ilene. ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/20/2018 7:40:00 PM
I agree. I'm addicted to classical music, fine cheeses, and my computer. I can do without coffee, beer, and bagels, however, even artisan breads though I have a weakness for them. Some of my poems describe some of the foods I've eaten in Paris. / M
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Date: 8/19/2018 1:44:00 AM
Love it xomo
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Date: 8/18/2018 1:49:00 PM
ah yes...writing of the essentials : ) yessirr...one medium dark roast...two sugar one cream and an espresso shot ...andt two old fashion plain donuts
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Date: 8/18/2018 9:38:00 AM
Our very reliance on the objects you note lead to inspiration to which other poets can relate. Sources of inspiration are often hard to define, but anything that brings us "to our knees" is the impetus of a message crying to be heard. Profound, meaningful poetry, Ilene. Hugs, Carolyn
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