Things

There are certain things in life I couldn’t do without – Reading, music and a home Where I can muck about. Pencils, paper, ice cream, beer, Coffee, bagels, cheese – Take them from me and you will Have brought me to my knees. Note, they’re objects I describe Which sate my appetite. For people, that would be Another poem I’d have to write.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2018 8:29:00 PM

...Where I can muck about … You have given me a smile which will last all evening with this wonderful line. Thank you, Ilene. ~ Gershon

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/20/2018 7:40:00 PM

I agree. I'm addicted to classical music, fine cheeses, and my computer. I can do without coffee, beer, and bagels, however, even artisan breads though I have a weakness for them. Some of my poems describe some of the foods I've eaten in Paris. / M

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/19/2018 1:44:00 AM

Love it xomo

Sand Blown

Date: 8/18/2018 1:49:00 PM

ah yes...writing of the essentials : ) yessirr...one medium dark roast...two sugar one cream and an espresso shot ...andt two old fashion plain donuts

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/18/2018 9:38:00 AM

Our very reliance on the objects you note lead to inspiration to which other poets can relate. Sources of inspiration are often hard to define, but anything that brings us "to our knees" is the impetus of a message crying to be heard. Profound, meaningful poetry, Ilene. Hugs, Carolyn