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Thine

For you I'll cross the night Even when the ink sky Is barren of the moon and stars That guide. For you I'll brave the storm However strong its plight However loud the thunder roars Its strikes. For you I'll walk across Treacherous trails of strife I'll keep up even through the cross Of trials. For you Is the address Of all I say or do Your presence is my happiness No lie. For you Is all I care I will stand by your side You can count on me forever I'm thine. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 06.29.10

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Date: 1/19/2011 4:51:00 PM
thine sends tingles up and down my souls spine...love it
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:07:00 PM
Lovely write. Sweet! Love, Susan
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:01:00 PM
Very Beautiful! Happy Writing!
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Date: 7/6/2010 8:30:00 AM
Very beautiful thank you for sharing this piece. - Jodie Q
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:23:00 AM
enjoyed reading your poem and congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Caroline. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 2:16:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice cinquain series. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congrats Carol., on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:18:00 AM
Congrats C.C. on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. extraordinary choice to share.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in AlohA Land...
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:54:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/30/2010 9:54:00 AM
What a wonderful profession of your unyielding love, Caroline. I know it comes straight from your heart. Remarkable use of the multi-cinquain form to convey your devotion! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:32:00 AM
Heartbreaking write, Caroline-Cécile!! Sp schön geschrieben!!! Und vielen Dank für die Kommentare und Wünsche...All the best...Gert
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful write!
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:14:00 PM
god I love romance and you write it so well!
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:08:00 PM
C.C. is this u? saw the last name change and was not sure..I like it... am in Hawaii on vacation with my "honey poo" so have a new cell phone to use the internet now.. so fun.. an extended belated birthday gift.. WoW.. enjoyed your amazing write tonight too.. words of power and very poignant ... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ....
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:08:00 PM
Nice expressions for a dedicated love and its yearning
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