Thine

For you
I'll cross the night
Even when the ink sky
Is barren of the moon and stars
That guide.

For you
I'll brave the storm
However strong its plight
However loud the thunder roars
Its strikes.

For you
I'll walk across
Treacherous trails of strife
I'll keep up even through the cross
Of trials.

For you
Is the address
Of all I say or do
Your presence is my happiness
No lie.

For you
Is all I care
I will stand by your side
You can count on me forever
I'm thine.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 06.29.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beesley Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 4:51 PM
thine sends tingles up and down my souls spine...love it
Mills Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Lovely write. Sweet! Love, Susan
Spears Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Very Beautiful! Happy Writing!
Quintero Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Very beautiful thank you for sharing this piece. - Jodie Q
Culverhouse Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:23 AM
enjoyed reading your poem and congrats on the featured poem!!
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Caroline. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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July 5, 2010 at 2:16 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice cinquain series. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Adeite Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Congrats Carol., on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Congrats C.C. on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. extraordinary choice to share.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in AlohA Land...
Fisher Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
Devonshire Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 9:54 AM
What a wonderful profession of your unyielding love, Caroline. I know it comes straight from your heart. Remarkable use of the multi-cinquain form to convey your devotion! Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Heartbreaking write, Caroline-Cécile!! Sp schön geschrieben!!! Und vielen Dank für die Kommentare und Wünsche...All the best...Gert
Harrison Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Beautiful write!
Byrne Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 8:14 PM
god I love romance and you write it so well!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 8:08 PM
C.C. is this u? saw the last name change and was not sure..I like it... am in Hawaii on vacation with my "honey poo" so have a new cell phone to use the internet now.. so fun.. an extended belated birthday gift.. WoW.. enjoyed your amazing write tonight too.. words of power and very poignant ... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ....
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Nice expressions for a dedicated love and its yearning
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