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Thin Line

Thin Line 


You hate me when i am around you 
you hate me when i am away
if hating thrives you everyday
i am your energy and 
your medicine at your need
when you gossip for your play.

Poetry 5/18/12 by  Keith Kadell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 6:49:00 PM
hate destroys,nice write Keith check my Love vs Hate,think you will like
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/12/2012 12:49:00 PM
thanks for good comment... :D
Date: 5/22/2012 6:54:00 AM
Touching poem Keith, you have to visit my poems - I have only happy poem :) :) - oxox love and smile to you Anne-Lise
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/22/2012 2:35:00 PM
thank you.... looking to make another positive poem.
Date: 5/18/2012 7:29:00 PM
past experiences, i'll be okay... thanks
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