Thin Line

Thin Line 


You hate me when i am around you 
you hate me when i am away
if hating thrives you everyday
i am your energy and 
your medicine at your need
when you gossip for your play.

Poetry 5/18/12 by  Keith Kadell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:49 PM
hate destroys,nice write Keith check my Love vs Hate,think you will like
Relf Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 12:49 PM
thanks for good comment... :D
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Touching poem Keith, you have to visit my poems - I have only happy poem :) :) - oxox love and smile to you Anne-Lise
Relf Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:35 PM
thank you.... looking to make another positive poem.
Relf Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 7:29 PM
past experiences, i'll be okay... thanks
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