Thin...

Compassion with passion 
is a curse of choice
Wearing thin 
by each burning voice
How do we ‘win’ 
if we choose to ‘whine’
And where does ‘begin’,
Begin at the vine…
.
eyes cried out 
and hands went reaching 
searched the verses 
for deeper meaning 
desperate stares 
in darkly places 
replacing smiles 
in once bright faces … 
how far do we go? 
.
energy exchange 
of the mind is game 
doing for others 
as yourself the same 
but what of ‘them’ 
when the smart do teach? 
what of ‘them’ 
who refuse and beseech? 
what of ‘them’ 
who feed on care? 
what of ‘them’ 
who pretend it’s fair…? 
... stand up, I agree. 
repairing yOURself, 
doesn’t being with ‘me’. ..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ford Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 8:32 PM
There is much wisdon in your words it is apparent that you write from a place definitely not shallow, I commend you Izzy
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Hello girlfriend.. how u be? back to Soup for poetry.. great to see ... luv this piece.. quite unique... a sad state.. when dealing with weight... truly fine.. like mellow wine.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Alamilla Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 11:33 AM
The flow pimping when pimping was pimping is SIR
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