Thief

Her beauty steals breath
Like furious fire
Her soul walks the night
Alone with desire
Her eyes mesmerize
With visions of love
Her lavender lips
Sent from heaven above
Her heart bleeds a river
To oceans of pain
Her beauty steals breath
Like clouds steal the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/31/2008 9:33:00 AM
Excellent write Wayne, Congratulations for being featured here. I really enjoyed the images your creative writing prompted... MPK
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:16:00 PM
Wayne - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 11:20:00 PM
A very heartfelt write...loving, full of love:) Congratulations on being featured!!Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/29/2008 12:57:00 PM
Awesome write here, Wayne!! I really like the title ... there is more than one way to be a thief ... smile ... this is a very well-deserved write to be a feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Wayne on the featuring of "Thief." Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 4:44:00 AM
I especially love the first two lines, makes the entire poem, not that the rest isn't fine. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:10:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having you poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 3:35:00 PM
Whoa. Passionate and so lovely. Congrats on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:02:00 AM
This is so gorgeous and passionate, I loved it! Blessings to you, Kristin
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