Thief

Her beauty steals breath
Like furious fire
Her soul walks the night
Alone with desire
Her eyes mesmerize
With visions of love
Her lavender lips
Sent from heaven above
Her heart bleeds a river
To oceans of pain
Her beauty steals breath
Like clouds steal the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Pig Knuckles Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 9:33 AM
Excellent write Wayne, Congratulations for being featured here. I really enjoyed the images your creative writing prompted... MPK
Jordan Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 7:16 PM
Wayne - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
Lakhera Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 11:20 PM
A very heartfelt write...loving, full of love:) Congratulations on being featured!!Love, Chitra
Mason Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 12:57 PM
Awesome write here, Wayne!! I really like the title ... there is more than one way to be a thief ... smile ... this is a very well-deserved write to be a feature this week. Congratulations!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Wayne on the featuring of "Thief." Vince
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 4:44 AM
I especially love the first two lines, makes the entire poem, not that the rest isn't fine. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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October 26, 2008 at 5:10 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having you poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 3:35 PM
Whoa. Passionate and so lovely. Congrats on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 4:02 AM
This is so gorgeous and passionate, I loved it! Blessings to you, Kristin
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