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Thief

Her beauty steals breath Like furious fire Her soul walks the night Alone with desire Her eyes mesmerize With visions of love Her lavender lips Sent from heaven above Her heart bleeds a river To oceans of pain Her beauty steals breath Like clouds steal the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/31/2008 9:33:00 AM
Excellent write Wayne, Congratulations for being featured here. I really enjoyed the images your creative writing prompted... MPK
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:16:00 PM
Wayne - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 11:20:00 PM
A very heartfelt write...loving, full of love:) Congratulations on being featured!!Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/29/2008 12:57:00 PM
Awesome write here, Wayne!! I really like the title ... there is more than one way to be a thief ... smile ... this is a very well-deserved write to be a feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Wayne on the featuring of "Thief." Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 4:44:00 AM
I especially love the first two lines, makes the entire poem, not that the rest isn't fine. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:10:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having you poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 3:35:00 PM
Whoa. Passionate and so lovely. Congrats on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:02:00 AM
This is so gorgeous and passionate, I loved it! Blessings to you, Kristin
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