Tracyann Brear Poet Rhyme

Thie Moon Walk

you were nowhere in sight last night
as the moon walked me home
I forgot to feel alone
because the moon walked me home
it shone down and lit up my path
even made me laugh
when I stopped
so did it
I enjoyed that walk
every single bit

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Muhammad Imtiaz February 10, 2018 at 11:51 PM Hi Brear you have really painted a beautiful picture of the feelings one may have about moon. Lovely Poem

K Cochrane February 10, 2018 at 12:49 PM I think I might have been on the same walk once or twice! Congratulations on your featured poem! I very much enjoyed reading it :-) Thank you for sharing.

Line Gauthier February 10, 2018 at 8:43 AM Charming poem. I remember that very special feeling. Very well captured, Tracyann.

Karen Da February 10, 2018 at 6:51 AM I love the moon so much and this one's very nice poem about it. Good job!

Silent One February 1, 2018 at 5:12 PM Great first post... Welcome to poetry soup..

Line Gauthier February 1, 2018 at 8:46 AM Delightful. Welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Best wishes. Tracyann Brear February 1, 2018 at 9:33 AM Thank you so much. Nice to be here

Arturo Michael November 22, 2017 at 3:18 AM Very nice...and it's true...the moon will walk with you...All the best Tracyann...a very good start

Jan Allison November 15, 2017 at 3:20 PM what a charming poem Tracyann I loved the fun aspect to your poem with the moon walking you home and being your companion:-) hugs jan xx Tracyann Brear November 17, 2017 at 1:23 AM Thanks so much for the lovely feedback X