Thie Moon Walk

you were nowhere in sight last night
as the moon walked me home
I forgot to feel alone
because the moon walked me home
it shone down and lit up my path
even made me laugh
when I stopped
so did it
I enjoyed that walk
every single bit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/10/2018 11:51:00 PM
Hi Brear you have really painted a beautiful picture of the feelings one may have about moon. Lovely Poem
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:49:00 PM
I think I might have been on the same walk once or twice! Congratulations on your featured poem! I very much enjoyed reading it :-) Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:43:00 AM
Charming poem. I remember that very special feeling. Very well captured, Tracyann.
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Date: 2/10/2018 6:51:00 AM
I love the moon so much and this one's very nice poem about it. Good job!
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:12:00 PM
Great first post... Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:46:00 AM
Delightful. Welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Best wishes.
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Tracyann Brear
Date: 2/1/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much. Nice to be here
Date: 11/22/2017 3:18:00 AM
Very nice...and it's true...the moon will walk with you...All the best Tracyann...a very good start
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Date: 11/15/2017 3:20:00 PM
what a charming poem Tracyann I loved the fun aspect to your poem with the moon walking you home and being your companion:-) hugs jan xx
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Tracyann Brear
Date: 11/17/2017 1:23:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely feedback X
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