Thicker Than Water

canya hear awh lookit –
		  [oh
this is -			
                                  [chirp chirp!
            artistic

ya hear that?  The chirping –
                                  very artistic.

what’s that:

            oh it’s the gutter and the –
		            blade of grass

perfect blade of grass beneath that industrial

			                 air conditioner

just framing that picture 
                                  and the blue –

             the light blue, the cream, 
                                                the red -

the little windchimes,


the dogs barking,

		the brown shed.

the newly -

	the newly planted…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 24, 2009 at 6:48 AM
wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke
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