Thick Skulled

genius in me fails to escape ~ trapped under a titanium plate By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/10/2021 3:34:00 PM

Thick full stop me thinks

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thick as two planks

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/8/2021 2:35:00 AM

That is very funny. Thank you for sharing. Kind wishes, Kai

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2021 4:30:00 AM

Indeed intended tongue-in-cheek, but I do reckon some numbskulls possess metallic heads, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/6/2021 4:59:00 PM

Great Monoku that I want to decipher a little more David, metal turns into steel when beaten long enough, and if you beat it long enough, the brilliance inside you is unleashed. Beat wishes with the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/6/2021 11:56:00 PM

Thank you for attempting to decipher my monoku Lasaad, what I will say is when metal is beaten long enough you will get a few sparks popping off lol, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2021 2:55:00 PM

A bit funny :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2021 10:41:00 AM

A poem and a comedian must have room to write such was the intent of your poem and I enjoyed.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/6/2021 3:01:00 PM

Definitely no offence intended to anyone with a plate in their skull Kim, just humiliating myself cheers David