Thick Skulled

genius in me fails to escape ~ trapped under a titanium plate

By 
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Flaherty Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Thick full stop me thinks
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Thick as two planks
Neumann Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 2:35 AM
That is very funny. Thank you for sharing. Kind wishes, Kai
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Indeed intended tongue-in-cheek, but I do reckon some numbskulls possess metallic heads, cheers David
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 4:59 PM
Great Monoku that I want to decipher a little more David, metal turns into steel when beaten long enough, and if you beat it long enough, the brilliance inside you is unleashed. Beat wishes with the contest.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 11:56 PM
Thank you for attempting to decipher my monoku Lasaad, what I will say is when metal is beaten long enough you will get a few sparks popping off lol, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 2:55 PM
A bit funny :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 10:41 AM
A poem and a comedian must have room to write such was the intent of your poem and I enjoyed.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Definitely no offence intended to anyone with a plate in their skull Kim, just humiliating myself cheers David
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