Thick Fog

Slowly the fog comes creeping, then swish Fog covers all thickening fast Swirling, shawl like, curtaining Sunflower's yellow gone Wrapped in tapestry Waiting for sun's Appearance Lifted Veil
Allegory: Symbolic work: A work in which the characters and events are to be understood as representing other things and symbolically expressing a deeper, often spiritual, moral, or political meaning.. Giorgio
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:14:00 PM
Sara, , congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 11:20:00 PM
Sara, . CONGRATULATIONS... goodnight....LINDA
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Date: 10/19/2013 6:05:00 PM
When I read this poem the first time, I was unaware that it was a winning poem in Giorgio's contest...Congratulations on your win! This is a beautiful poem, Sara. I am very surprised that it did not place higher!
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Date: 10/16/2013 2:43:00 PM
I can relate to this poem, because I can feel that there are some hidden emotions within your words. Sometimes a deep feeling of sadness comes over us, and it can change who we are. Similar to depression. And, we are waiting for those sunny days and warm feelings to return. This poem was beautifully written, Sara! And, as you say...it reads like a winner to me! :)
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Date: 10/15/2013 5:35:00 PM
Most impressive write, my dear Sara. This one had destiny on its side.... Certain to win.... Congratulations....Jake
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Sara
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Sara! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/13/2013 11:16:00 AM
A change of season or perhaps one who waits for brighter days. Well written and with nice imagery
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Date: 10/13/2013 8:11:00 AM
Excellent. a phenomenal write. Nice work. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/12/2013 9:18:00 PM
This is a wonderful and excellent write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem here this evening! What a surely allegorical piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/12/2013 8:27:00 PM
A great allegory and excellent nonet my dear friend Sara. i love it so much & so enjoyed reading it this morning. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/12/2013 7:05:00 PM
This is a phenomenal poem, Ms. Kendrick. The symbolism you used is phenomenal. Nice work!
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Date: 10/12/2013 1:18:00 PM
unique take on the theme, sara... so vivildly conveyed... fog, shawl, veil; interesting!. what a fine work!...:) huggs
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Date: 10/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
very graphic poem Sara that says so much in few words excellent pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/12/2013 9:59:00 AM
Yes indeed an allegory,Sara. COOL poem.
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